Saturday, May 22, 2010

Floating


Following no apparent path

Languidly drifting

On the water

Aimlessly

Travelling along

Indiscriminately wandering

Never stopping it's nomadic journey

Gliding through time




floating,
but not flying-
wandering with no path,
or speeding
with a single -minded fury-
transparent,
but ominously suffocating
bringer of life-
harbinger of death...
how can something
brainless,
heartless,
souless
be so complex?



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7 comments:

  1. anthonynorthMay 23, 2010 at 8:36 AM

    A great mystical quality to this one.

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  2. PattiMay 23, 2010 at 8:58 AM

    These are excellent poems! You are quite a writer! I love the new look to your blog and the pictures are beautiful~ Thanks for sharing these!

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  3. brenda wMay 23, 2010 at 9:46 AM

    Indeed. I loved the journey, thank you.

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  4. Sherri B.May 23, 2010 at 12:53 PM

    These were wonderful...powerful words.

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  5. Tumblewords:May 23, 2010 at 5:52 PM

    A how lovely this is! Love the feel of the words and the motion of water movement.

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  6. SandyCarlsonMay 23, 2010 at 6:10 PM

    I wonder that, too.

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  7. gautami tripathyMay 24, 2010 at 3:34 AM

    I like it..

    Tentacles

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